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TStarlight Glimmer's First Student: A "Human"?!

• MLP: FiM
• Romance
• Comedy
• Slice of Life

Starlight Glimmer finally graduates from Twilight's program, and is told to find a student of her own! Twilight recommends going to a new planet, inhabited by "He-you-mains". She tries to make a friend, but finds something more!

• Sex
• Alt. Universe
• Twilight
• Trixie
• Starlight Glimmer
• Self Insert

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